tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post6641817609728368962..comments2023-08-21T06:42:10.547-07:00Comments on One Of a Kind: Elixirlibithinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-70545191394759617472012-05-09T06:22:16.928-07:002012-05-09T06:22:16.928-07:00thankyou Ayala .. it is indeed x xthankyou Ayala .. it is indeed x xlibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-16772353786950262772012-05-08T16:50:48.473-07:002012-05-08T16:50:48.473-07:00Great weave here. Thank you for your kind words. I...Great weave here. Thank you for your kind words. I am sorry for your loss, so heartbreaking. Hugs.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-51225478964546685262012-05-07T16:57:46.299-07:002012-05-07T16:57:46.299-07:00thankyou so much Claudia I love that you enjoyed i...thankyou so much Claudia I love that you enjoyed it that means such a lot - heady days - hugs Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-29761737935516661302012-05-07T16:53:58.736-07:002012-05-07T16:53:58.736-07:00:) I know was brilliant - know what you mean about...:) I know was brilliant - know what you mean about UV lights tho' remember feeling people staring at me and wondering why - had I grown a head - No - my hot pants (remember them) had split .. Oh the embarrasment .. :))hugs Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-48918810352380938062012-05-07T09:59:14.686-07:002012-05-07T09:59:14.686-07:00love how you capture the intensity here...
concret...love how you capture the intensity here...<br />concrete floors cramming soaked<br />barely breathes soul strung fired<br />first elixir of orange and brown<br />highlights ultraviolet rays ... great....and you even bent the shape of the poem to underline the movement of the music...nice..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-1221459979748640992012-05-07T09:18:43.502-07:002012-05-07T09:18:43.502-07:00Loved clubbing and the atmosphere the beat you cou...Loved clubbing and the atmosphere the beat you could almost physically feel beating within ...but those UV lights always seemed to zone in on my white underwear ! thanks for sharing !Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-81347137453855229342012-05-07T06:30:16.234-07:002012-05-07T06:30:16.234-07:00Ha :))yes the excitement of it all - thankyou so m...Ha :))yes the excitement of it all - thankyou so much for your kind words - really pleased you enjoyed :)libithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-15435293711725668692012-05-07T06:27:43.221-07:002012-05-07T06:27:43.221-07:00thankyou Henry for your very warm appreciation, th...thankyou Henry for your very warm appreciation, that means so much - Love Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-23289088743288277022012-05-07T06:23:19.784-07:002012-05-07T06:23:19.784-07:00thanks so much Charles - yes and still wasn't ...thanks so much Charles - yes and still wasn't time enough- Love Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-84663728678708270932012-05-07T06:21:20.882-07:002012-05-07T06:21:20.882-07:00thankyou for your kind words - Libthankyou for your kind words - Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-49657192105377443302012-05-07T00:16:01.946-07:002012-05-07T00:16:01.946-07:00Ah take me back to the club- the dark humid dampne...Ah take me back to the club- the dark humid dampness- bodies dancing under the lights- the UV lights exposing those pearly whites! Love the sweep of the form, and the great wordplay and visuals created- great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-29724982361405480852012-05-06T19:59:58.811-07:002012-05-06T19:59:58.811-07:00love the word choices and line work. a party of a...love the word choices and line work. a party of a literary experience. very good!!!!! I like creative thought and expression done with freshness. This was a refreshing read with new voice I look forward to reading more from.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-63578605840142880232012-05-06T19:20:27.777-07:002012-05-06T19:20:27.777-07:00Those nights of dancing to the music until the daw...Those nights of dancing to the music until the dawn's light trickled thru the window, that was a strange transcendence which your poem captures so hypnotically. Wonderful write, bringing me into the soul of that music.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08784125345525784337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-49700313049572133192012-05-06T18:46:35.042-07:002012-05-06T18:46:35.042-07:00Nice form and colors weaving in your words ~ Tha...Nice form and colors weaving in your words ~ Thanks for sharing this ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-89080566947952105352012-05-06T17:19:43.317-07:002012-05-06T17:19:43.317-07:00thanks so much Brian -- your house must have been ...thanks so much Brian -- your house must have been rockin' :) -- Love Liblibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-77836345622469138232012-05-06T17:04:50.047-07:002012-05-06T17:04:50.047-07:00oh there is some nice visuals in your piece...ha.....oh there is some nice visuals in your piece...ha...we used to have live music at our house ever friday making our own club...a band or dj...made a bit of money which made the pearly whites a bit wider..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-72394798014355204802012-05-06T16:25:16.277-07:002012-05-06T16:25:16.277-07:00thanks so much Laurie - yes those gleaming white t...thanks so much Laurie - yes those gleaming white teeth on tanned faces - sure had some stamina back then :)libithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-16930395692445720422012-05-06T16:15:34.433-07:002012-05-06T16:15:34.433-07:00I remember those pearly whites... I don't miss...I remember those pearly whites... I don't miss my clubbing days at all. You really put me there, though!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-54205084330243706802012-05-06T15:35:27.641-07:002012-05-06T15:35:27.641-07:00thankyou so much Pat x xthankyou so much Pat x xlibithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3045992556793001406.post-91466760269796776722012-05-06T15:34:07.332-07:002012-05-06T15:34:07.332-07:00Quite the words weaved and dance through the verse...Quite the words weaved and dance through the verse you gave, like the flow and set up of it as well. great job!Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com