many a year has passed
since I walked that golden mile
but bright lights were a flickering
and besides I needed the smile
must remember to pack my woolies
as it can chill the bones alright
down at the northern pier
that wind can gather some might
I decided for my journey
I'd hop onto a tram
remembering how my poor feet blistered
I know I'm such a ham
but when those bright lights beamed
illuminations galore
my smiles went out in streams
and I wanted more and more
I stayed beyond the midnight close
before I climbed the tower
had a dance on the ballroom floor
wurlitzered round the hour
safely tucked into my B & B
my energies are dead
until my full English breakfast
with marmalade and spread ;)
Las Vegas of the north :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like quite a night!
ReplyDeleteyep but always chilly winds :)
Deletebut mine was a journey of the mind - snug and warm - xx
DeleteBlackpool? Looks lovely. Never went there but have seen it on TV many a time.
ReplyDeleteYears since I had a full English breakfast.
Your poem made me smile :)
it is a great spectacle to see - dazzling -
Delete'full English' yes delicious the full works but can't have too many :) - Lib
nice....have not been, but...i love me some NYC...and i def walked there until my feet bled...i gt lost in a good way in these places and just dont think about it until i stop...smiles.
ReplyDeletenow that's a place I'd love to go - catch me in one of those diners and Times Square and Macys and ice skating and central park and Empire State Building and and Oh!! everywhere in NYC xxx Lib
DeleteIt's great to return to those fondly remembered places and to the memories. Nice.
ReplyDeletethanks so much Joanne - great place - Lib
DeleteI will have the pleasure of forming new memories, like the one you describe here, in a few months when I travel abroad. Wandering in new places always brings me a huge smile. Great poem. :)
ReplyDeleteohhh that sounds brilliant - is it UK you're coming - feel your excitement :) have a wonderful time Rachel xx Lib
DeletePlaces are such fun to go and get lost to see what you can see, that is as long as no one tries to shoot me haha only place I ever been is NYC, grand time.
ReplyDeletelucky you Pat - wish I could journey there to NYC - on my bucket list for sure - cousin went for New Year -
DeleteQuite a night and wonderful breakfast there ~
ReplyDeleteHappy day to you ~
thankyou Grace - have a lovely day also x Lib
DeleteNice, Lib...the breakfast sounds good :)
ReplyDeletewell they usually are in those B & B's famous for 'em - but don't care for those greasy spoon cafes their brekkies are urghh - thanks Ayala
DeleteGave me wanderlust for sure :)!
ReplyDeletethanks Anna xx
DeleteI really enjoyed the combination of verse and image Lib! There was a feeling of motion that encompassed me as I traversed your words! Nicely crafted and nicely done! Roger ☺
ReplyDeletethanks Roger really pleased you enjoyed the bright lights xx lib
Deletenice..it def. can get chilly in england but then a good english breakfast makes up for it...fascinating city...
ReplyDelete:)) and pretty wet too :)) but yep a good old fry up :) does the trick xx Lib
Deletereally nice. Love the little asides your put in here. The being a ham and the final parenthetical, really strong…really must be in a parenthetical mood tonight, as I find myself drawn to them in the various poems I read tonight…quite good, bringing the reader in closer, on a personal, conversational level….really strong. Great illustration of the evening. Thanks
ReplyDeletethanks so much Fred - I appreciate that xx Lib
DeleteWish I were there with you, girlfriend. We'd giggle into the night...our laughter adding to the bright lights...and O, that marvelous brekkie! I like the picture this poem poses in my fun-seeking brain :))
ReplyDeleteOhhh I'd LOVE IT!!!! imagine it - feels bright just thinking about it Jacquie xxxxx Lib
Deletewoot - woot xxxx :)) hugs ya
DeleteA wonderful reverie. Much enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteOn my "grand tour" of the UK, I was warned not to go "on my own" to Blackpool or Liverpool (where I thought I should perambulate); but I took folks advice. I doubt those cities are any "dodgier" than others. I found nothing but kindness and graciousness everywhere I traveled. I had an odd landlady in York, and several in the far West of Ireland but I suppose one expects oddness and cool suspicion of Americans in some places. Loved the poem. I like the warm feel of your being tucked in on your trip. Charming poem.
ReplyDeletesadly Gay think you were as well, particularly being on your own but the people of Liverpool are very friendly and warm hearted on the whole and only too willing to help. Known for their quirky sense of humor :)But you chose wonderful places to visit I love York and the shambles but not been to Ireland, lots of lovely places there. - xxxxxxx much love and hugs Lib
DeleteNice adventure. I really like the ring of "wurlitzered round the hour".
ReplyDeletethanks Stephen xx lib
DeleteThere was a lot in this that reminded me of San Francisco' Pier 39 where there's much to do and definitely cold. (An aside, Google is making it so hard. I'm on my 4th attempt)
ReplyDeletethanks so much - think I've heard of San Francisco old fun fair machines - would love to visit - xx lib
DeleteI just realized that I need a vacation. I had so much fun reading your poem. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLoved this piece--and it does make me feel like a vacation! Beautifully written as well!
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